When writing poetry, I sometimes like to "write from the gut." What I mean is, I don't always ask my brain what to write next; I ask my gut, or my heart, whatever you want to call it. And this method can be very effective. I have come up with some startling juxtapositions and interesting lines this way. The poem below is exceptional in that it was written nearly entirely "from the gut." Enjoy.
Mother don’t care
And father don’t care
Pink and purple underwear.
Serving themselves
From the self-serve machine
I scream.
Pounding the surf
In a far, far off place
Is the answer to all
Our parents’ mistakes.
It rolls in with the moon
And comes up with the sun
It’s no more than three
But a few more than one.
It’s lovely and cruel
And can make your heart crack
Mother don’t care
Father don’t ask.
Just pay some lip service
And child support
Mission accomplished
Abort! Abort!
Just take what you will
Will you really take that?
Mother don’t care
Father don’t ask.
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